Wings Unfolding-2
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A long black limousine pulled around the corner and slowed to turn into the driveway. Monroe looked down to see if her pounding heart was moving the fabric of her coat. She wished the sun would come out long enough to allow her to don sunglasses. Then she would have felt completely sure of herself.
The car moved up the drive and under the portico. Monroe was astonished at how close it was to her. One step, one reach and she could have touched anyone that emerged from the passenger side of the car. She looked down at the burning cigarette, flicking ashes.
She recognized Serena from her leg. That was all it took--a perfectly heeled, slim leg emerging from the car. No need to watch the rest of her come into view. Her husband Robert followed her. Clarissa unfolded next, followed by her live-in Stephen. Would they look? Would they see her eyes and know? If she deliberately avoided looking at them, would they suspect?
Why do I always forget how self absorbed they are, how conscious of position? Monroe thought. They were the children of the lord of the manor. They felt no need to acknowledge an underling guest smoking outside the front door. Only Stephen had the courtesy to nod before he placed his hand in the small of Serena's back and propelled her forward while she touched a handkerchief to her eye. There wasn't the faintest glimmer of recognition.
This remembering, plus the small success with Stephen all served to strengthen her. Monroe waited until the driver eased the limousine away from the door. She crushed the cigarette thoroughly under her heel and walked into the house.
"What are you saying, Franco?" The high-pitched wail came from the waiting parlor where the butler was taking the heat.
"Ma'am, as I said, the funeral was yesterday." Franco spoke in the calm level tone he always did.
"That can't be!" It was the closest Serena could come to screeching. "Why oh why did I leave such important details to the baby of the family! Monroe has always been an incompetent fool."
Monroe almost snorted. Why indeed? They had left everything to the baby for years. They had even stopped coming home for the holidays. If they rang, it was to ask to use the house for a party of some sort.
It seemed there was some unwritten contract that the youngest, whose birth had robbed the family of their caretaker, would assume that role. Especially when it came to caring for their ailing, housebound father after a hunting accident left him partially paralyzed. How gracious their gods had been to see that the accident had occurred when their Monie was sixteen and old enough to care for all the details, from Father's care and meals, to organizing the renovation that had made the house comfortable for him.
As far as her siblings were concerned, Monroe had all she deserved in life.
In that regard they were about to be right for the very first time.
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Tune in tomorrow for the next exciting episode of Wings Unfolding :)

4 Comments:
Wonderful cereal, I mean serial, Carolyn! :) I remember this one -- a challenge, wasn't it? But I also remember not reading a middle or end; so that either means you only shared the beginning with us, or else you're going to finish the whole thing now! Either way, I'll be watching for more. Good write! ~Samm
Thanks for reading Samm!
You're right--this one came from an old Skateboard prompt or challenge or something. It might have been a contest. At any rate, it is finished, but I find myself editing as I go. It's been a long time since I read through it.
So is the length of the segments good? Or are they too short/too long? I'm aiming for something that is easy to read in just a few minutes....The first two segments were close to 500 words.
Oh, and I did get your comments on Today's Words. Noticed your post on Skateboard but for some reason my connection keeps going bad on me today and I didn't get to respond, and at this point probably won't make it back to the board today. Thanks for all your support!
I think 500 words is a good-sized chunk. Easy to read in little snatches of time, plus, if I get behind, I can read 2 or 3 segments this size to catch up. :^) ~Samm
I appreciate the feedback very much, Samm!
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